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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHY AREN'T YOU PEOPLE REVIEWING THIS STORY....I CAN SEE YOU'RE READING IT!!!!!!!! ;~)
I just finished reading all 10 chapters and I am completely enthralled. I hope you work Kurt into the main plot somehow (I have this Nightcrawler fetish). I like your writting style, allowing my imagination to picture the scene in my own way. A couple of things I noticed were spelling, and I'm not talking about the accents. Minor little typ-os, nothing major. Also, I seem to remember Remy refering to himsely as I as well as Remy. I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
I just finished reading all 10 chapters and I am completely enthralled. I hope you work Kurt into the main plot somehow (I have this Nightcrawler fetish). I like your writting style, allowing my imagination to picture the scene in my own way. A couple of things I noticed were spelling, and I'm not talking about the accents. Minor little typ-os, nothing major. Also, I seem to remember Remy refering to himsely as I as well as Remy. I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of the bubble gods!! Damn woman! I just read every friggin' chapter til ten and omg... I'm speechless! Yes, there is so much going on but you know what? I LOVE IT! It’s chaotic and stressful and completely perfect when you have that many characters in one setting. It’s easy for me to follow because I write the same way, jumping back and forth like that. But you do a good job of breaking the different scenes by placing a small line. Love it Jade! Can Not wait for the day you finally find your muse and get crackin’ on the new installment! *huggles tight* Fantastic job!!! I seriously love how your mind works.