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for United We Stand

by Nathalia

person K-9: P.I.
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice i like it hope to see more
person madsciencewillow
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. An AU with one reasonable point of departure, (Rogue was raised more like a daughter and future leader, and thus stayed with the Brotherhood) that has the same potential for lots of gratuitous sex as 'To the Victor', while allowing people to stay more in character. It'll be interesting to see where it goes.
person Rose
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I think you have a good concept going for you, and a lot of potential. You just need to slow it down a little. It feels rushed. Your first chapter could have fit nicely into three more detailed ones. I'm going to be feverently waiting for the next chapter.
person Jaina12
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've kept up on this story as well. Is this going to be a less dark fic than your other one? I can't wait for more.
person kaleb
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not as good as your original "to the victor"
person seastar1234
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like your new version. Please include Rogue/Remy as a couple.
Waiting for the Update. Thanks
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well written, though to be perfectly honest I preferred the dark potential of the Brotherhood having the X-girls at their mercy and having their way with them, as opposed to the two joining forces.

Good characterization, description, but yeah, I preferred the evil potential of the first ;)