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More please? It's very interesting so far.

Nice additions. Definite improvement seeing Kurt being a bit more defiant and less with the begging and panicking, especially since by the age of 19 he'd have been with the X-Men for a good 3 years at least and probably more like 4-5 based on his apparent age when the show started. If you need some help with the German don't use babelfish, it sucks. You're welcome should be bitte, bittesehr or bitteschoen or, if you want something a bit longer/more formal/with more 'feeling' you could use nichts zu danken(the e goes into schoen, btw, if you can't type the umlaut, which I'm too lazy to figure out how to do on this keyboard). This is a pretty good site I use moderately often b/c my German's 20 years out of date: http://www.dict.cc/ It has whole phrases and colloquialisms and is much better than ever using babelfish. Other than that...yay for plot and smut and and torture all that fun stuff! Lord knows I'm aaaaaall about the character torture. ;) Can't wait for the next update.

Interesting so far, though Kurt's a biiiiit wussy for my taste he seems moderately recognizable rather than just an OC with Nightcrawler's name and powers and your last Kurt/OC fic was quite good. I'll be watching for updates, thanks for sharing.