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Nice update man, and that was a nice plan for Jean I bet no one would have seen that coming, although I bet when asked what happened to them they 'll just make something up about being locked up whenever someone asks. Although I get the feeling Scott will get the full story if just to help them deal with what happened to them, since Emma would get over this a lot easier then Jean.

Anyway great time for an update and I can't wait to see the break out for the next chapter.

Well that certainly was an intense scene there with Emma and Jean but from a way of breaking them down I can see it being very effective. A few more of those types of sessions and Jean wouldn't last, Emma would take longer to break of course given she's been through this before but I can see that chair taking her down a notch in resistance.

You know I think that was the best you ever did of Deadpool so far, that was great with him in there. And I nearly laughed out loud with the 'aren't you too young to be in a bar' line that was just perfect timing there.

great chapter i feel sorry for Jean having to feel the effects of that drug again and so soon. I liked the idea of forcing emma to watch all that and what she was going through her self can't wait to find out what happens next to both of them.

Chapter 15

Well that was a nice update, we saw a bit of what Scott and Logan were up to and the Shaw/Emma scene was interesting to see as well. I do wonder how he will start to break the girls down even more in the next few chapters and how long they can hold out as well. And you finally got that Emma/Jean scene in there sure it was only one way but I think you could fit in one with both girls going at it which should be awesome to see lol. Keep it up I can't wait for the next one.

Great chapter Jean seems to be struggling still with the effect of the drug that Selene gave her. Are we going to see a flash back of what Emma went through cause all we read is she went through this and that without no real scenes of what she went through and how much pain she went through back then, anyway can’t what to see what you put what happens next.

Chapter 14

Well things have certainly gotten darker for them all haven't they? I did expect a bit more of a fight with Jean trying to fight off the chemicals but I'm guessing after it wears off is when she really starts to feel the violation of being forced to do what she did. Even if it wasn't her fault at all. And I do wonder what Shaw has in story for Emma too. Should be interesting to see what the next few chapters are and how the girls hold out since it will take time to find them.

great chapter some scenes remined me of yours and AgentG story hellfire and brimstone. Any way i feel sorry for Jean going through all that against her will. Can't wait to see what Shaw has installed for Emma keep up the good work.

great chapter loved the scene when Shaw was talking to Deadpool that was funny. i liked the fight that Emma and Jean had against Deadpool i thought the xmen would have heard them fighting when the first gernade went off any way can't wait to see how Emma and Jean get out of the Hellfire club keep up the good work.

nice little fight scene here and I really think you got deadpool just right in this chapter, I can't wait for his other little appearances that's for sure and for the next chapter since this story is really getting interesting now with the Hellfire back in the mix.

great chapter if you asked me Emma seemed jealous about Jean been scott's best friend, any way can't wait to find out what happens next now that deadpool has been called in by shaw i hope no one gets killed can't wait to find out keep up the good work.