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Ummm...oh..wow...another Scott/Jean fiction from you. I was way surprised you put up with the Rogue/Scott Evo fic, but not this one! First you make Scott look like an asshole, and then you make Emma retarded, and then you make Jean a complete dope!! Dumb...shocked....not...it was obvious...

great chapter its sad that emma is leaving the story she was really good i had thought you were going to keep her in but i guess not. any way are you going to do another story that links in with this one. i think that would be a good idea.

Great chapter man I knew that you have an Emma/Scott/Jean scene in this story. Any way I feel sorry for Emma been in love with Scott but she is only second to him. Any way can’t wait to find out what Emma say to Scott next keep up the good work.

Chapter 20

Well that was a nice little chapter wrapping up the Hellfire club members as it will take them time to get out of prison knowing them and teir high price laywers they could drag things out for a long time.

Anyways I think maybe it should have been mentioned that expeience with the three of them could also had been from when Emma and Jean linked minds. Since doing something like that I think it makes sense to be a bit more attuned to things, and then when you get in the stress, chemicals and other things, I feel it was a combination of all of that. Plus I'm surprised you had Jean pick that up since the last time you tried that it only caused problems with the story.

great chapter i thought this bond that Jean and Scott share would have been blocked by Emma. Any way i thought emma and Jean would have been needed to talk alot more about what happened to them both, by the way are there going to be any more long time effects happing to jean i mean she went through more than what emma went throught, can't wait to see keep up the good work.

Well that was a great battle there and a nice way to end the 2/3 mark (or close to it) to this story. I think you pretty much did a really good chapter here and I liked a few of the fights you but in there as well. Can't wait for the aftermath when both Jean and Emma have to deal with the events and all that happened. Plus as you showned Emma knows the real truth behind Jean and Scott as well.Plus with the ending we had talked about makes sense since the Hellfire Club memebers although beaten are still alive and could come back one day as well.

great chapter loved the way scott rescued jean. so selene got a taste of her own drug that was good. i can't wait to see what happens between scott and emma now keep up the good work.

Well you certainly got the girls in a tight spot. I thought Jean would have to punish/rape that girl as a sign of loyalty but killer her was definately amping it up. But I get the feeling Jean is going to at the last moment use that dagger on Selene. As for Emma she's got a mental battle but I know for a fact that she's stronger then Mastermind so she'll kick him out after she pushes as hard as she can with her mind.

Maybe even sending his powers back at him as well or redirects his focus into Shaw's head. But the rescue is on the way and I see a big battle for the next chapter.

Great chapter i liked the way you ended it there Emma has now got a real fight on her hands but what about Jean i know Jean won't kill in cold blood but if she doesn't there is not telling what selene will do. can't wait to find out if the others managed to rescue them in time before its too late keep up the good work.

great chapter i thought Jean was gone you had me fooled anyway can't wait to see what happens next now that jean and Emma both have got there powers back i bet its going to be a real big struggle from now for the both of them. althought i think that if the xmen do rescue them something is going to go wrong. Keep up the good work.