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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is phenomenally hot.
First, the writing is technically excellent.
But the subject matter is truly wonderful. Storm was perfectly in character, gracious and considerate and sensual rather than "Mistress Whiplash." The kink was very seductive, sensual, nothing extreme or cruel, just enough to add spice. The d/s element was, IMO, so mild it wasn't threatening or demeaning. Logan's struggling, defiance, yet underlying trust was just beautiful.. I honestly had a lump in my throat. And Storm's gentleness and magnanimity were just amazing.
Congratulations. I loved this!
First, the writing is technically excellent.
But the subject matter is truly wonderful. Storm was perfectly in character, gracious and considerate and sensual rather than "Mistress Whiplash." The kink was very seductive, sensual, nothing extreme or cruel, just enough to add spice. The d/s element was, IMO, so mild it wasn't threatening or demeaning. Logan's struggling, defiance, yet underlying trust was just beautiful.. I honestly had a lump in my throat. And Storm's gentleness and magnanimity were just amazing.
Congratulations. I loved this!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice one and I laughed at the funny parts. Maybe Logan should Storm back for what she did and tie her to the bed and have his naught way with her.
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.