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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One
Well, this is really good! I'm sorry not having reviewed sooner!
I can see they really needed the time alone. They had been through a terrible ordeal and they needed peace and calm. So, they can talk things over and vent fears and frustrations with plenty sex.
This chapter was both sweet and kinky. I really liked. And it's only the first part! I can just expect more goodness. :)
Well, this is really good! I'm sorry not having reviewed sooner!
I can see they really needed the time alone. They had been through a terrible ordeal and they needed peace and calm. So, they can talk things over and vent fears and frustrations with plenty sex.
This chapter was both sweet and kinky. I really liked. And it's only the first part! I can just expect more goodness. :)
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two
What you know... all mornings should be like that. A good, hot shower and a big breakfast are excellent for beginning the day.
What you know... all mornings should be like that. A good, hot shower and a big breakfast are excellent for beginning the day.
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three
Your smut scenes are getting increasingly wilder each chapter. I'm wondering what you'll have planned for the next ones.
Man, Jean is scary! She can force a man to his knees and make him beg. Fortunately Scott knows like handling her. Or it should be "manhandling" her. Heh.
Your smut scenes are getting increasingly wilder each chapter. I'm wondering what you'll have planned for the next ones.
Man, Jean is scary! She can force a man to his knees and make him beg. Fortunately Scott knows like handling her. Or it should be "manhandling" her. Heh.
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four
Mm... Good chapter in terms of character exploration and sex scenes. Really good.
And I agree. Their relationship is far more important and moer fulfilling than any goddamned, overglorified cosmic parrot (you can tell I'm fed up with professionals and fans trampling over one of my favorite stories until it's become a huge, unmanageable mess!).
Mm... Good chapter in terms of character exploration and sex scenes. Really good.
And I agree. Their relationship is far more important and moer fulfilling than any goddamned, overglorified cosmic parrot (you can tell I'm fed up with professionals and fans trampling over one of my favorite stories until it's become a huge, unmanageable mess!).
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five
A beautiful end for a nice fic. Really sweet.
I've enjoyed a lot your story. Keep writing, man. You rock. ;)
A beautiful end for a nice fic. Really sweet.
I've enjoyed a lot your story. Keep writing, man. You rock. ;)
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i'm happy they are going to get marryied
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending. i knew he was gonna propose, but you did it beautifully. i can't wait for your next fic... whatever it may be. but i LOVE this one tho. ~_^
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great loved the hot tub scene
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was such a sweet chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter and see scott's surprise.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter