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for The First Born

by GodofDeath

person CeeCee
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly hope you'll update this story soon,and frequently. It's gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. I love the language and dialogue between them, along with Remy's slight hint of his usual dialect and accent. Logan's sweet and lovable in this, I love his comment that the blue robe would make him look like an idiot. That made me chuckle, and I get the impression that Remy would prefer Logan somewhat undecorated, anyway. I'm really enjoying this story. Please, say there will be more, pretty please with sugar on top. I'm so glad Dee pointed this little gem out to me to add to my reading list.
person Malinen
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, it was great!! Please continue! Have to read more! :3
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grumbles* Wish there was more damn it. I love this story. I especially love the misunderstanding bit. Where Logan thought Remy was a girl? *gigglesnorts* that was funny. Write more please!
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
some of us do wish that you continue this...

enough with the introductions, let this story get moving already...
person Beej
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd forgotten how much i enjoyed this story! You haven't posted chapter 4 anywhere else have you? You definitely should! Great job as always. :) I hope the next update doesn't take quite as long.