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for An Honest Mistake

by roxierose13

schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sexcellent!
person asm613
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read about 8 stories with john/bobby tonight/this morning. This is honestly
the most fulfilling. It's well written. It's well thought out. You said you've been
working on your characters' style- well i think you've got it right. This is the
Bobby/John that i love to read. And best of all; the ending is happy for John and Bobby.
I get tired of reading the stories where they end up separated and unhappy. I also like
the fact that Rogue probably thinks she's being all noble and selfless, giving
Bobby the opportunity to find his physical needs elsewhere. Her arrogant, self assuredness
is what gives Bobby the opportunity to find true love with John. Not just a physical
relationship; but an emotional/loving connection with John. Thanks for the story.
person Katie
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHH! You are too good. Seriously, this is incredibly well written and the imagery is just...well, beyond compare. Great job man.
person krista_shadow
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant, bravo
person Abby
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was prety nuch amazing lol. I loved it a lot! I can't wait to read more of you stories if you have them if not make more! Nice job!
person Sekre
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it!