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This is awesome shit!!! update asap, i wanna see more Kurt-torture! CX I am sick as hell, but hey, Kurt-torture is the best!!!

Long live Kurt-torture and U!! XD

Poor guy can't even get a break in the shower. :( Oh well, keep this amazing writing up! I can't wait for the next chapter. Just wondering if there are going to be anymore X-men characters showing up soon...

oh it is so vary good of a story i love it so i cant wait for the next update... have agood one bye the way i like that chapter...

I am offially obsessed with this fic....and you just had to stop there...didn't you?

I love the story! *pats Kurt's head* I'm sorry, sweetie! It's okay! I can't wait for more!
~Demyx~

Wow, what a dark story. I can't say that I like the part about cutting off Kurts finger but I like your imagination when it comes to character development. Keep up the good work.

J_

What took you so long? Excuse the textual outburst. Now, I wish to give a few pointeroos. I've spotted several errors in this chapter, also. However, I'm sure you could easily find them. For instance, "Then" and "than" are two different words. Then indicates an add-on, such as "and then they died" or "I'm going to slice up your insides, then I'm going to make you drink it". That sort of deal. There were a few others. I'm deeply sorry for the criticism. I'M not perfect, no one is. A few grammatical and spelling errors, but I believe in you! Aside from that...

Haha. Yes. Let your mind wander free among the mushrooms of imagination. Just don't eat them. They're poisonous! And wait. He lost a bloody FINGER? Dear God, that's gotta look unnaturally unsexy. Or maaaybe it just adds to his charm. And y'know what? I like gore and disgusting situations. It makes the story more interesting! Hooray for homosexual intercourse problems! "He had to take a dump". Ha. I almost thought Logan was going to go soft on Kurt. Until I realized that he was heating up a KNIFE. KNIFE! Yes, boys. Torture your little pet. Make him eat his own words and regret ever being conceived in the womb.

I know authors dread and hate this statement, but update soon. Or I'll kill you. (:

I really liked your story, so far it was fun to read and it has Kurt in it. Okay, I could live without the torture stuff, but well, it is Kurt torture.
You wrote that there will be Scott/Kurt, I'm a bit curious about, how you will make it happen. I have a few guesses, but they all seem kind of clichèd, but I have trust n you, that you have something interesting in your mind^^

Maybe you'd like to replace "Halten sie an" with something else. 'Halten sie an" would be more fit, if Kurt were to ask Sabertooth to stop a car, or something like this, but to ask him not to do something (he's about to do) "Bitte nicht!" (Please don't) would be better. But this is just some random advise which you are free to ignore ^.^

Woo! Kurt torture! Excellent plot device in any story, inmyhumbleopinion. There's only one small pet peeve of mine. Though the storyline itself is actually highly fun to follow, you might wanna take a look at some of your grammar and spelling. Or get a friend! We all make mistakes, it's no big deal. From an experienced reader's perspective, a fanfiction must be both interesting and easy to follow. Keep up the good work! And don't die like all the others. ): Add a little more torture. Get creative! I wanna feel my organs squirming when I read this!

Excellent, then. Glad I could be of some service. Quite remarkably, at the same time I reached the portion describing the mutilation of Kurt's pinky, I was chewing on my own. My overwhelming sympathy caused me to dig my teeth into it just a bit too hard. On the other hand, I'm restless to find what creative ideas for torture you may have in store. Creativity just makes me happy. I also forgot to mention that the "Touchdown!" quip made me snicker. In glee! Imagined Blob contemplating picking Kurt up and throwing him to the ground. Like a good little football.

Props to your own beta! G'day. :)