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I'm really glad I checked this section. This is an exelent fic, I feel sorry for Kurt but you are doing justice to this story. Keep up the fantastic work. xx I hope to read more soon.

Very good and very exciting! I want to read more xD
I really do feel sorry for Kurt, he's my fave X-man but once I started reading I just couldn't stop! xD

Please write more! *begs and puts on puppy eyes* Please!!? ^^

*ish grinding teeth* I agree whole-heartedly with whoever said Creed should be castrated. I really enjoyed this story (sick little fuck that I am), mostly because of your note at the end. Kurt WILL heal, yes? And he WILL end up getting someone who gives a shit, so I'm cool with the torture, for now, hard as it is to imagine poor Nightcrawler in such a position. I like the history behind the family that you put in at the beginning (I would've left a review for every chapter, but I deem it neccesary to read the whole story first ^^). Not too many people are brave enough to write so graphic a torture/rape story, so kudos to you! I know I really shouldn't enjoy this story if I plan to claim I'm sane later, but the inner struggles for everyone and the utter ruthlessness of the rapists is fantastically realistic. If someone's bent on ruining your life, they aren't going to stop because you say sorry, sorry Kurt. Hearts and Hugs to you and all those who helped out with the story progression and ideas.
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Kirsti

One more tip, darling. Expect critique. Bask in it. Study it. You can't please everyone.

Heheh. c: I don't really have anything against any of them, but... I think Sabretooth was the cruelest of them. SO. He should get the worst punishment. >D

And I think any deaths should be more of an accident situation~. Like... Logan finds a gun [ maybe they had some locked up somewhere in a hutch or saftey box? ] and shoots at Scott when he's trying more hero-ism and it hits Fred instead. Or something. And maybe Marie can be the one to castrate Sabretooth. xD I think she'd find it fun after what they did.

Then Logan should just be recaptured by the police and put up for the death penalty. o:! Some of Kurt's healing could be having to face him in court for a testimony~! ...Kay. Sorry, rambling. xD BUT. If you liked any of the ideas, you're obviously welcome to use them. ;D And you're welcome to contact me if you want more ideas or something. lmfao. HEART.

Holy Hell I was dead and my computer crashed and I got a new one and it totally kicks ass and pantpantpant. D:

Yes, unfortunately I wasn't able to comment on the last chapter because of my horrible absence, boo hoo. Allow me to supply my inferior review, embedded within being both critique and happiness abounds!

Still grammar problems, and if I were a less lazy person I'd offer myself as a beta. On the other hand, my mentioning this makes me feel a tad bit unfeeling, and realize that I do understand how much work you must put into this story. n_n I can live with the grammar, unlike some. It doesn't affect my reading unless it makes the text completely illegible. This is when I get frustrated.

Done with that. Strut forth to more important matters. OhmyGod, Kurt in a nightown. Do you have any idea of how excited this made me? Such a feat requires that he develop a blatant fetish for women's clothing--after he gets over his fear of brute men forcing him into said pieces. Wow. :D Scott does seem like Mr. Prince Charming, doesn't he? I'm impatient. MAKE SCOTT KICK SOME CROTCH AND SWEEP KURT AWAY. In the gown. Definitely in the gown.

In my humble opinion, your gradual downplay on Kurt's jokes was spot-on. I hope he breaks. I hope his self-esteem shatters into tiny little specks on the floor. I hope he cuts his foot on the specks. I adore Kurt to no end, for he is one of my favorite characters (if not THE character to grasp my favoritism), but torture gets me off. So do men in dresses.

Please put him in a dress again. And stab Blob in the gut with a leaf blower.

My review sucks because I have had no sleep for 49 hours. Birds have laid eggs in my eyebags.

OOOHOOO.

With love. n_n

Y'know, I really don't see how on earth this is an Evo fic, or an X-Men fic of any kind. There's absolutely nothing recognizable about any of the characters personality wise and the lack of powers make it that much more obvious...seriously, is this just your way of getting an audience for your original torture fetish fic, by co-opting popular characters from a moderately popular fandom that you're apparently only vaguely familiar with and saying that it's them even when there's really no resemblance at all? Obviously it's your prerogative and there are just as obviously people reading, though I can't imagine it has anything to do with them being Evo fans as there's nothing of Evo here but the names. I like dark fic as much as the next person, but this isn't dark, it's just just a torture kink w/a really sad excuse for a set-up and it certainly doesn't involve any characters I'm even vaguely familiar with.

"“I’m kind of tired, sex and blood loss tend to ware you out” Kurt joked “If you don’t mind, I’m taking a nap. Good night” He closed his eyes and rested his head on the wall before the other two could say anything."

This part killed me. What? He's joking? Are you kidding me? No one would joke in a situation like that. Don't get me wrong, I like your story, it's interesting, but every time I read about Kurt being sarcastic it absolutely gets my goat. It's just plainly unrealistic. He would cry, he would beg, he would scream, he would be in a state of utter shock. People ususaly don't joke, when they're in such a state, you know? That's the only thing I really don't like it this fanfic. Just try to make characters behave in a more realistic way and it will be ok. Good luck.

Oh oh! I have ideas!

Blob should be killed, Sabertooth should be castrated and Logan just knocked out. 8D Lmfao.

I don't normally like AU stories, but this is really interesting. xD

Please keep going~

...why is it that people always like to torture their favourite characters? Haha.