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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you, plz continue?
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do continue! I love kurt and want Rogue to pull the diehard "cut the binds with glass pulled from our body" thing. Plus we all know oson as one of them is free the other three are fucked.(YES YOU KILL THE BAD GUYS! After what kurt went through? that or at least have a chapter where they get the same in prison.)So yes poor kurt blah blah fan girlness blah blah. But DO keep writing. And even for english not being your first language there are only a few understandable mistakes. Like not using the proper tense of a word but hey, translation is translation. Keep the goo work up, and rescue the jester elf before there'sn o more jester left! ><
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where the next chapter? =(
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ur story is pretty interesting the first chapter I was bored of it but hey u can just judge it by the first page so I decided to keep reading =D I actually like it keep up da good work ^-^
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ur story is pretty interesting the first chapter I was bored of it but hey u can just judge it by the first page so I decided to keep reading =D I actually like it keep up da good work ^-^
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
next chapter??
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's some grammar issues, but you say you've got a beta now, so that's good.
The way you've got the characters reacting is amazing. It's incredibly realistic. That said, I don't think you should have any of the character kill or maim the bad guys. That's a line that's hard to cross realistically.
There's some moments when we get the internal monologue of characters that get a little awkward.
The way you've got the characters reacting is amazing. It's incredibly realistic. That said, I don't think you should have any of the character kill or maim the bad guys. That's a line that's hard to cross realistically.
There's some moments when we get the internal monologue of characters that get a little awkward.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaah, love your story... I'm addicted and desperately waiting for an update!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE DAMN YOU!!!!!!1one
Seriously man.... I.... I'm going to cry if you don't!
lol
Seriously man.... I.... I'm going to cry if you don't!
lol