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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wahoo - damn! O.O I'm a lil' dumbstruck to be honest... just... wow. And damn but that was a freaking GREAT twist at the end - never suspected! *two thumbs up* and a special 'bless you' for contributing to the small, but thankfully growing, number of good McCoy erotica on here!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Kitty, you made it work! I'm really proud of you as this worked out a lot better than I had expected! The title is a bit...well, I would've chosen another one, but now that's just me. ^-^
The contol-thing-part and having-to-be-strong-for-the-others-all-the-time-part kind of gave her away though. It may have been Ororo too, but I highly doubted it, so she truly was the only conclusion left.
I have to say...you know how to write smut and you write it good! So, please don't stop anytime soon, allright?
Ciao
Dendey
The contol-thing-part and having-to-be-strong-for-the-others-all-the-time-part kind of gave her away though. It may have been Ororo too, but I highly doubted it, so she truly was the only conclusion left.
I have to say...you know how to write smut and you write it good! So, please don't stop anytime soon, allright?
Ciao
Dendey
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not the best you've written KD but not bad
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need to go take a shower now...a very long and very cold shower. Wow, that was hot and I never expected *her*.