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for Doctors Orders

by EleniD

schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOO!!! *okay that was ten times better than my suggested Hank/Scott/Jean threesome, lol*
Oh man, was NOT expecting that at all - well done! I'm looking forward to seeing what else you do with this ;) and hopefully I'll be able to update before next month :P wonderful chapter!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.

Can't believe he popped Scott...But, somebody should.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, though Scott's a bit OOC.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WooT!!!!! *fans self* OMG thank you for adding another chapter, please bring this to completion... again, LOL. There's so little really great Hank erotica - thank you for adding some much needed smut ;D, I can't wait to see how THIS situation works itself out and what happens with Scott... *threesome mayhaps? haha*
person BJones
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow..talk about a surprise! I never saw that one coming. *s* very sexy! I always love seeing the Monsters get some love.
person KJDB
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, YESSSS! Jean has been a naughty little doctor and needs to be corrected! Very nicely done, Kitty. Walking the fine line between real D/s and playing at it. I somehow suspected it might be Jean when you said how 'she' was always so strong for everyone else and just needed someone to take care of her for a change.

I can see the attraction of Hank; like another author said somewhere - Dr. Jekyll in Mr. Hyde's body; so correctly deserving of the codename "Beast", and yet not. I liked this story very much; would love to see more of the good doctor 'taking care' of Miss Jean!

person KJDB
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"so? Isn't anyone going to say anything?"

How in the name of Sam Hill can you leave this there?!?!? C'mon, Kitty, you're talented enough to have them talk it out and end up with a very happy, Jean pleasing threesome!!

schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! Naughty Naughty! Hope there's more to this and soon.
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I want more! Please.
person The Bud
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually read review and write at the sister site, but I've got to say I loved this!