rate_review Reviews

I think this is actually the first time I've sat down to read this story...or I might have read the first chapter a long, long time ago.

I like the idea of these two as being happily married. They're a cute couple. I wanted to smack Rogue, though!!!

this is quite interesting to read, but i am wondering. Where the bloody hell does the babies come from.
u shuld put rogue behind a clearboard so storm can draw and explain how me make babies that could be a fun day..
keep on writing

Wow! That was promising and...original. Nice AU. I'd like to read more, please^^ This shows a possibility to become a real adventure with multiple chapters and perhaps some sequels as well. Hope you'll have the energy to continue with diligence and not let the plot get lost in "happy marriage" or "PWP" scenes. Still, it would be more than ok to spice the stroy with some aspects of romantic relationship. I try to avoid giving you any demands, I have a very bad habit of doing just that *grin* so I'll be ending this here ^^' best of luck with the fic!

Please continue! This has a very interesting beginning and I'm already hooked. I just love your writing style!

Finally had a chance to read this one and just wanted to say how interesting it is so far. I'm enjoying it and do hope you will continue it. :^)