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for My husband and my best friend

by jaymclg

person Linda
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story and I am looking foward to the next chapter.
person katie
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please UPDATE ASAP
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's still an interesting story, but I kind of wonder why you cut it off where you did.
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good and an original idea as far as I can tell. I don't know enough about the comics to know how close you are to getting the characters right. You might want to rewrite that first sentence, though. It's a bit odd.