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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The storyline itself is good, but the grammar and punctuation is really bad so its really hard to follow. With a little more revision, it could be a very good story.
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what dude I like this story too!
So get off your high horse and update...
Writers don't write for anybody else but themselves
and those few who understand.
So get off your high horse and update...
Writers don't write for anybody else but themselves
and those few who understand.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good, but the chapters are incredibly short, so it's sort of hard to get into it. I look forward to reading more though!@
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I like your story, and I wanted to tel you taht you shouldn't feel bad about people don't reviewing.
Most people never review, I know I only do it when extremely necessary!
I write X-men fics as well, I've started 2 and wrote other 2 oneshots, and in total I think I had 3 reviews.
More or less revioews won't makje your story better, and it certainly shouldn't let you down! People simply don't think about writting.
If you feel like writting, then write, no matter how many reviews, hits or votes you get ;)
I like your story, and I wanted to tel you taht you shouldn't feel bad about people don't reviewing.
Most people never review, I know I only do it when extremely necessary!
I write X-men fics as well, I've started 2 and wrote other 2 oneshots, and in total I think I had 3 reviews.
More or less revioews won't makje your story better, and it certainly shouldn't let you down! People simply don't think about writting.
If you feel like writting, then write, no matter how many reviews, hits or votes you get ;)
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Women' You need to update soon I like your story and if you don't update soon I'm going to go crazy lol. hehehe' No Please Write more pleaseeesaee!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, getting reviews around here is like pulling teeth, so threatening not to update unless you get 5 new reviews is setting yourself up for a lot of heartache. Demanding one should be enough and if you update on a regular basis, have an actual plot and write the story well, the reviews should start coming in a bit more regularly.
Ok, time for the constructive criticism. You need to pick if you're going to write this in first person or third person. Switching back and forth is confusing and annoying. You stated that you're looking for a beta, that will help a lot. Sorry, I'm not offering. I'm working on 4 stories of my own and don't have time to work on someone elses. Good luck and I hope this helped.
Ok, time for the constructive criticism. You need to pick if you're going to write this in first person or third person. Switching back and forth is confusing and annoying. You stated that you're looking for a beta, that will help a lot. Sorry, I'm not offering. I'm working on 4 stories of my own and don't have time to work on someone elses. Good luck and I hope this helped.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update pls,never thought i'd be lookin' forward to someones bad day, hehe. i think the reviews have t do w/ the section of the site. been a while since the x-men hype so not a lot fics or reviews here. it's also probably your not allowing anonymous reviews, most of the ppl here dont have accounts. got get down, i'll b keepin' an eye out 4 the next chapter. ^.^x
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if it helps i liked your story
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story...I check everyday to see if you've posted more...I'm dying here! I need more soon lol...it's really good you should keep going.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please write more! Nothing really to say except mm, pyro.