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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Isn't that why we all love Wolverine? Cause of his possessivness.
=D
Great lemon!
~*Eli
=D
Great lemon!
~*Eli
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I apologize for not being a queen at constructive criticism, but here goes:
The beginning was *really* rushed in my opinion. And I add that its my opinion because I know there are readers out there who slam their heads on their desks when they have to read through five pages of "intro" before the real action ensues.
Also, this story is listed under "X-men movie" category, so I came into it expecting the movie personalities of each character. Logan had this...rough country bumpkin type attitude and speech about him that was slightly unnerving.
Lastly....rouge is a french word for red. R-o-g-u-e is the x-men character. (sorry, its a pet peeve of mine.)
3/5
The beginning was *really* rushed in my opinion. And I add that its my opinion because I know there are readers out there who slam their heads on their desks when they have to read through five pages of "intro" before the real action ensues.
Also, this story is listed under "X-men movie" category, so I came into it expecting the movie personalities of each character. Logan had this...rough country bumpkin type attitude and speech about him that was slightly unnerving.
Lastly....rouge is a french word for red. R-o-g-u-e is the x-men character. (sorry, its a pet peeve of mine.)
3/5
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the couple of Rogue and Logan!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, not bad.
One question though... is it Rouge or Rogue?
One question though... is it Rouge or Rogue?
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this would have been a great story if it wasnt for the fact that you completely forgot rouge's powers.