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person Lina
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! KD, you're back!!!!! ::HUGS AND KISSESS:: Once again, as I've said 100 times, brilliant as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Gimpy
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so cute. Four guys to afraid to tell each other how they feel. Can't wait to see were the story goes.
person Justanothergyrl
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That story was sooooo hot!!!!!!!!!!! I had hot flashes reading it. The last chapter was great. I am so happy that someone finally did a pair between those characters. I am a big Logan/Victor Creed fan so I kinda wish the sex screen between them two were longer. Anyways, great story!!!!!!
person Gimpy
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay you wanted reviews. I liked the chapter, though I did think it kinda jumped from the previous chapter, I kinda would have liked to see the arguement between Logan and Victor, and the angst that Kurt had to have been going through. I know it sounds mean, but I kinda have would have like to have seen more angst Hank, but I still liked it. But I havr to say damn, you got two chapters out in a day, it can take me weeks to even write one chapter and months to post it. Great Story, though
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The promise of smut withheld just makes me hungry for more...And I just finished "So Much Can Happen!" o.O

If I didn't know better I'd think you had a Creed fetish. :p
person Chicken
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"...A kind of gypsy wild smell that Logan had never touched before..." Whoa, I fell in love with that image. I've read and re-read this chapter, I can't seem to get enough of it. Brilliant!

P.S. Dont worry the next chapter of my HaLo story is in the making. It will get better (or worse) soon enough.
person Chicken
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It may be cliche but you are one of the few out there who can actually pull it off with some believability, and for that I applaud you. I look forward to the future chapters on this one. Again, bravo.

P.S. How the hell do you keep doing this?? I'm having a damn hard time just spitting out one fic.
person Justanothergyrl
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you sure can tease someone!!!! I really hope you plan on finishing this story,I really would like to see how this story ends. I have been looking for a good foursome between those pairings. I love your story, keep going.
person Hotsexttoy
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!Why did you stop? Please keep going!