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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, ok...are we gonna get into a cut-off war 'round here? Are you gonna force me to retaliate for this by leaving my next chapter hanging? *grins*
Still doin' a damn good job with this K...Creed is actually sweet. Now I feel bad for what's gonna happen to him. Logan's actions and motives are totally believable, the guy couldn't get the start of a relationship right even if someone else tried to start it FOR him.
Again, love what you're doin' here. Yer crankin' these bad boys out like free condoms at clinic. Great job.
Still doin' a damn good job with this K...Creed is actually sweet. Now I feel bad for what's gonna happen to him. Logan's actions and motives are totally believable, the guy couldn't get the start of a relationship right even if someone else tried to start it FOR him.
Again, love what you're doin' here. Yer crankin' these bad boys out like free condoms at clinic. Great job.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah more cuteness. I love Logan and Victor together and the midget comment. And the poor jam, I guess life as a perservitive was just to much for it to take. Love the story
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! THE DRAMA!!!! ::feints:: it's just..... TOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! STEAMINESS!!!! Will victor and doc get together??? I feel so bad so doc, all alone in a cold bed with nothing but his hand to warm him ::sigh:: it's sad to be so blue!!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Claps, so cute. I love Hank, always caring about other people first, and poor him for thinking that he is a subsitute. I actually like Logan as a sub, it is cute. And Victor and Kurt are so cute.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I don't believe it! They can be sooo sweet if they just want to!
Great chapter oh worshipable godess!
Just see what you get up to when I'm not there for a week! You post a new story and don't tell me! That's not nice, ya know? I've got to say this though...I love it! It's just a tidbit too central with Kurt. Apparently all three of them want a piece of the fuzzy blue dude, but what about each other? Allright you actually hinted at the answer of that question with the end of Chapter eight, the hug! But what about Beast? Is he just going to join in to get what he wants(Kurt) or is there more? If so...please fill me in! I'm dying to read his motivations! I know you always construct complex and difficult mindsets behind Hank's actions but so far...I'm afraid his part compared to the whole story was a bit...small? Not that he wasn't there enough...he actually was quite a constant prescence and I like that, but his thoughts were mostly left out. You were usually focusing on Kurt or Victor...I don't think there's been a part between just Logan and Hank yet...and the breakfast doesn't count, obviously.
So you see, I've been thinking about your plot-development quite a lot and I've got to say, so far I like it. Especially the end of chapter six! That was a hint that Charles is playing matchmaker, am I right?
Well, just get on with it asap and...thanks sooooo much for the very first authors note of your story...I am touched, flattered and just generally bouncing with joy!
Dendey
Great chapter oh worshipable godess!
Just see what you get up to when I'm not there for a week! You post a new story and don't tell me! That's not nice, ya know? I've got to say this though...I love it! It's just a tidbit too central with Kurt. Apparently all three of them want a piece of the fuzzy blue dude, but what about each other? Allright you actually hinted at the answer of that question with the end of Chapter eight, the hug! But what about Beast? Is he just going to join in to get what he wants(Kurt) or is there more? If so...please fill me in! I'm dying to read his motivations! I know you always construct complex and difficult mindsets behind Hank's actions but so far...I'm afraid his part compared to the whole story was a bit...small? Not that he wasn't there enough...he actually was quite a constant prescence and I like that, but his thoughts were mostly left out. You were usually focusing on Kurt or Victor...I don't think there's been a part between just Logan and Hank yet...and the breakfast doesn't count, obviously.
So you see, I've been thinking about your plot-development quite a lot and I've got to say, so far I like it. Especially the end of chapter six! That was a hint that Charles is playing matchmaker, am I right?
Well, just get on with it asap and...thanks sooooo much for the very first authors note of your story...I am touched, flattered and just generally bouncing with joy!
Dendey
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter!!!! Ahhh... the drama!! Our poor characters!!!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Confetti flutter* Yay! Someone else with the "Logan can be a sub" notion! *Confetti flutter* Now my idea stinks. *Pouts*
These chapters were both sweet. I love how...loving...Hank can be. And poor Kurt. Kid can barely catch a break. It's sad how the one you want is always hardest to get.
These chapters were both sweet. I love how...loving...Hank can be. And poor Kurt. Kid can barely catch a break. It's sad how the one you want is always hardest to get.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked that 'fight scene.' and Poor Hank, though I like it when the world just keep shitty on them. Sorry I'm an idiot, didn't get the fact that it was a dream until I reread the chapter, sorry.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love 3 Days Grace! Chapter was good too. *chuckle*
So, to start I loved this part. Granted, it all happened just a little too quick. I found myself sort of stumbling with the abrupt start of this story. Granted, it does make you pay more attention to what you're trying to read.
All in all, a great TWO chapters. Love to see where you're going with this.
PS, How is it you can read my mind?
So, to start I loved this part. Granted, it all happened just a little too quick. I found myself sort of stumbling with the abrupt start of this story. Granted, it does make you pay more attention to what you're trying to read.
All in all, a great TWO chapters. Love to see where you're going with this.
PS, How is it you can read my mind?