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Awww! The Prologue was soooo sweet! I WANT that sequel!
I can't believe how well you made them interact in Chapter 13 and the part about Hank being touch starved...it was just *sigh*...it was realisic and charming. It's nearly half past one now...so please don't be disappointed by the shortness of this one...but I simply can't think straight anymore...even I need some sleep.
Dendey

::Sniffles:: Life... it comes to us all, even mutants. Ahhhhhh... what a wonderful story this has been. Thank you KD, thank you. ::rides of into the sunset::

Aww, that was so cute. Poor Hank, limping around, and Victor lossing a tooth is funny. Great Story, Thanx for the read

*Dances merrily with computer chair* I gots more cookies!! *wipes crumbs away* Ok, seriously...I shed tears for little (ok not little) Hankie. Is happiness really so hard to accept?

I'll have to kick out my next chapter soon, after Fri I'm outta commission for two weeks. The whole being in the middle of nowhere with no technological gizmos in order to visit relatives thing.

Wild abandon...that's what. Hank was still restraining himself. That's sooo sad, he truly shouldn't've done that, but he did and not there's nothing we can do about it anymore...'Sides making sure to kick him in the ass if Creed let's him get away with anything under five minutes the next time, because I definitely think this should happen more often! It's good for Hank, it's good for Victor, even if it's confusing him and it's even more confusing for Kurt and Logan. The fact that Victor accidentally broke the arm of the little girl...I find it astounding how you managed to draw the picture of a Victor who's actually careing enough to try and help the kid, but still so unused to it that he tries so hard that he actually manages to do some unintended damage. Or maybe he even planned it and just chose the lesser evil? Allright, plan is the wrong term, more like silently considered the possibilities and acted like instinct suggested would be best. Of course I liked the smut in the middle of the chapter, especially the part of Logan leaving his hand on Hanks thigh! That was just sooo adoring! But I have to say that...you are right, you are a little bit hard on Kurt at the moment...not emotionally like with Hank, but he's still a bit unsure as to how to act best and he's trying to squash that insecurity with seducing his intendeds...well, two of them anyway. But I will wait until the time comes and he can openly operate on three fronts, simultaneously! (Or is that too much to ask?)
I hope this review is still long enough for your tastes! If not tell me and I'll re-read everything and comment again!
Ciao
Dendey

On Chapter 6 - WOW!

I will say this much, Charley sure knows how to get to the heart of a problem. It's absolutely mind-boggling that, as powerful as he is, there's still all that unresolved sexual tension flying around the Institute.

Your right I never thought about it that way, the poor life as a percervative.
*Does little Happy Dance*
I didn't think I would like a 'nice' Creed but I do, and poor Hank, I love and angsty Hank. And will somebody please kick Scott in the balls, he really needs to shut up. Please write more. Please Please Please

Love chap 12! You can have your ham back now! Love ya! Oh, and if you want to have some help making a sequel to this story, talk to me! I would love to help. (Ok, it's really because all four of these guys are hot as hell! And I love anything with them in it ((well, not the hetero stuff)) Also, I want you to read my story. I just posted it up on the 6th! Tell me what you think!

Hating you for ending the story like this. Now you gets no ham!

LOL!!! 'Wolves don't purr!' Yeah, as if! But you wanna know my favorite line of that chap? 'Shut up McCoy!' That sooooo did the trick! Why do you even ask for advice? You truly don't need it, believe me! You just know what to do! Allright, so Kurt's talk with Victor was initially a bit unexpected and a little awkward, but the out-come of it was magnificent!
I'm still too stunned and a little overwhelmed from the smut-amout in the last two chapters...that I barely know what to say. But you did make Wolverine pull quite a stunt on Hank. I liked his persistence, he is like that, stubborn as hell if he knows what he wants...or thinks he does! ^_~ Hank reacted absolutely adoreably to him and I really liked how you projected their minds nervousness onto their bodies, like Hanks twitching ear. That was really good and it also showed how aware Logan is of his surroundings, anytime whether be it night or day.
How you made Logan relax! WOW! Just Wow! It shows how much he trusts Hank and how unconditionally he trusts Beasts judgement.
I like how you make Victor seem vulnerable, but you shouldn't forget that he probably needs to school his features when dealing with anyone else besides Kurt and the other two...but considering his rivalry with Wolvie he'll probably try to act around him too...I think deep down he's a bit like Hank, secretive about his needs especially. But the main difference is that Victor just takes what he thinks he(his body...AND his egoistical mind-set) needs, whereas Hank tries to deny himself anything related to his physical needs. Hank will give, because he's a generous person, Victor would give just as little as possible so that he can get something he craves in return. At least I think so...now it really is up to you what to do with the lot of them in the next chappie! I'm gonna check my e-mails now...who know's what might be waiting for me! ^___^