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I can't wait until you do Logan/Ororo

I'm a bit confused about Chapter 4.

You said Rogue can't touch anyone, but how was she able to do that with Warren then? And if she needed the real thing instead of a vibrator, why didn't she go all the way with Warren?

Just hoping you can clarify that.

Either way, the scenes were really hot and well done. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Man, that was a great chapter. My jaw did drop. where can i get a copy of that playgirl issue? haha, j/k.

LOL! I'd like to own my own copies of those magazines! ;p

LOL! A fun, amusing chapter. ;)

wow, that was a hell of a photoshoot for playboy and playgirl magazines. and i can't wait to read the others' reactions after seeing the pictures on the magazine that bobby got. update soon, slick. and talk to you later.

Sorry for posting over you I had to fix something that was bugging the crap out of me. Please repost. SyJen

An excelent start. Curious how matters will play out.

Y'know, I've read several of your fics here, and they read like really, really bad porn. Like, REALLY bad. I love smut, but this? Just... painful, dude.

It's obvious to anyone who has ever had sex that you definitely haven't - ever. Not even close. You don't know what you're talking about. You don't know the biology. It's a joke, really. (First hint - girls don't ejaculate when they orgasm. There is no "shooting of juices", or whatever. Duh.) You've obviously just read other bad porn and picked up your "knowledge" that way.

And the dialogue DURING sex? NOBODY talks like that. It's hilarious. Painful, but hilarious.

Seriously, dude, give up the smut, and go keep plagiarising other writers on fanfic.net. That's what you're best at.

Scott and Jean in Playboy? Damn, that's gonna be hot! ;)