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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story has been entertaining thus far. I was disappointed at the lack of sex between Alex & Laura (X-23). It might be cool if when you do write that scene that you make Alex the agressor (something that I'm sure Laura wouldn't be use to) and go from there.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay jott smut! :D
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man that was a great chapter. good job man. and love the jott smut. can't wait to see more. update soon.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Proceeding quite well. I'm impressed by the variety you've managed to generate in a genre that seems almost stuffed with cliche relationships. Magma vs Sunspot was an exspecialy nice thought.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have to say that I really do love this story get the next chapter up soon cause this one was awesome.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh, that was hot!!! and i can't wait to see some more. and i also wanna see more jott smut!!!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter and a nice moment between bobby & jubilee and Ray, Tabby and Sam. i can't wait to read the next chapter and i hope you read my new fic on ff.net called "Past, Present and Future" it's a movie verse kinda AU plus, it's a JOTT!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I rather like your first fics cos the 2 lasted ones are touching some disturbing subjects for me.
Now I know that I don't like Scott and Jean being exibitionist.
There, I can't imagine Scott and Jean posing for playboy cos:
It would be immature, it's pure exibisionism as it's not even because of a need of money. It would be dangerous for other mutants, until then they were safe in the street from sexual assault cos they were "freaks", if the men saw the women mutants as Jean it won't be the same. They are adults and teachers, what an exemple they do. Knowing that the others fantasm on them and the fact that they have picture of them naked and provokating is totally different etc etc etc
But, I guess some people like it and that's your fic, I just wanted you to now why I wasn't reviewing since your last long fic
I'll wait for a classical one ;)
Wen
Now I know that I don't like Scott and Jean being exibitionist.
There, I can't imagine Scott and Jean posing for playboy cos:
It would be immature, it's pure exibisionism as it's not even because of a need of money. It would be dangerous for other mutants, until then they were safe in the street from sexual assault cos they were "freaks", if the men saw the women mutants as Jean it won't be the same. They are adults and teachers, what an exemple they do. Knowing that the others fantasm on them and the fact that they have picture of them naked and provokating is totally different etc etc etc
But, I guess some people like it and that's your fic, I just wanted you to now why I wasn't reviewing since your last long fic
I'll wait for a classical one ;)
Wen
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is great I just hope everyone else gets to be in playboy now that would be cool. THsi schools startinh to look like a porno shoot and I love it. Keep up the good work babe.