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by marvelmaster616

person Jenskott
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

Jean isn't one for beating around the bush, right? She knew what X23 wanted, what Alex wanted, and took inmediate steps. Nonetheless, I almost pitied Alex. If Laura gets somewhat aroused, she'll drain him dry.

But at least he'll die a happy man.

And you can't tell Rogue and Remy aren't generous, can you? They were so kind and understanding with Warren... :)
person Jenskott
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

Scott is The Man. I'm so jealous. I want being like him.

This chapter was hot. I had something similar in mind for one story, but I didn't finish it. I'm lazy and busy of late...

I'll quit now the personal ramblings. A very good cahpter. And I was laughing when the Brhoterhood visited the Playboy Mansion. And Pietro has met little Crystal (a.k.a., Another Character Marvel Ruined), huh? Well, it'll be interesting.
person Jenskott
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

A Warren/Betsy love chapter with plenty sex. How can you wrong with it?

I'm so happy! *sniff*

:D

Great, man. Thank you.
person Jenskott
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Who knew Jeann had such a naughty mind? Answer: Many people.

And now Tab knows, too. Certainly Jean delivered her a "hard" lesson. But maybe she should punish her more. I think Boom-Boom hasn't learnt it. :)
person Jenskott
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8

Come on, Remy! Bang that river rat!

I bet you had fun writing this chapter. I had fun reading it. Especially when Jean dressed like Dark Phoenix. A naughty girl, indeed.
person Jenskott
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9

You know, Hank has one point. If they're busy having sex, they're too busy to get into mischief.

But I think Logan is starting to get a migraine...

Since when Scott and Jean are so show-offs? Oh, yes. Now I remember. ^_^

It's nice seeing Logan made up for Ororo and they are friends again. :D

Mm... If Mr. Hefner allows more students becoming playmates, there will be a riot.
person Jenskott
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10

How did it come Kurt was taking the snapshots? Then again, I don't think he minded him.

I can imagine Tab wanting being a playmate, yes.

Kurt is very, VERY lucky. Great scene, man. I was salivating.

And you can tell the wolverine to played the Taming of the Shrew. Hah!
person Jenskott
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six

Thank you for explain to me about the name in the birthdate verification.

Anyway... now we know why it is called the X-Mansion, isn't it? :)

Geez, right now all the students are searching for reasons for having sex, and partners for having it with. Sexual orientation or number of bedmates are no issue.

And all cause a tiny magazine. Heh.

And now the ripples are reaching the Brotherhood. Heh. May Magneto look after them.
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter shame that its over can't wait to see what ypu come up with next
person Crystal
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending. And I can't wait to read your next fic here. i'm sure it'll be as good as your other fics.