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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

person Kris_A
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well -that's- quite the ending, leaving us on the edges of our proverbial seats! Haha!
I really did appreciate the explanation of Stuart's actions. He seemed to, if not approve of, then at least tolerate the relationship, so it was sort of startling to see him snap like that for no obvious reason. Thanks for clearing that up. (:

I can't wait for the next chapter! ;D
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh, looks like Hank forgot she's an injured woman ;) damn those lust filled hazes. Great chapter and very helpful explanation on Stuart - poor dude :P hee, really can't wait now to see how you handle the McCoy side of the family. This made my day, hopefully your muse is as horny as mine is after that sexy cliffhanger and there'll be a satisfying update soon :D.
person Toast
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, as usual excellent work. Keep it up.
person Michael
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Back to cizilization, and everything I hate." Glorious way to get away from her family. beautiful chapter. Thankyou.
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this just keeps getting better, and yes manic depressive can get that crazy when off their meds, they always think they don't need their medication and then the doctors who don't calibrate the medications properly don't help either members in my family have that condition you nailed it on the head on actions.
person Aymiah
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gape*



*gape*


Blehh cliffhanger ><
person Kris_A
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that poor woman! Haha! She must be one amazing mother. (:

It's good to see Hank stand up for both Amanda and himself there, at the end.
Wow, the emotions are running on high in the household now!
I can't imagine what plot twist you're going to introduce next.

Also: "Jesus Christ on a pogo stick"? HAHAHAHA! Wow, that's one mental image that will keep me laughing for a long time! XD
person Toast
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just got to the end of ch 70, excellent work. please update soon.
person Toast
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good , keep it up!!
person A Fan
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Realy enjoying this! Can wait for the next chapter