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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

person Anon
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow next two chapters should be really something, great to hear there's going to be a sequel
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* now those were some high quality chapters of sexy-awesome :D. Sorry it took me so long to review - life *gives it raspberry*. Very nice twist with the past factor of Prof. X and Jean - I feel for Amanda. I once got stuck with a brand new phlabatomist *certain I mispelled that* - she couldn't tap my rolling veins and I got stuck eight times in one arm and ten in the other before my Mom came in and wanted to beat her to a pulp for not stopping, how I'm not afraid of needles I dunno, lol. Certainly clarifies things with Annie - though one can't help but wonder what with Amanda's unusual eyes if some teensy bit of that didn't rub off... hmm... fantastic set of chapters and as always looking forward to more!
person Toast
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As usual excellent work so when do we meet Hank's family? Soon I hope.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Bounces Excitedly*

3 Chapters in such rapid sucession....YAY!!!

Keep up the fantastic work!!!!!!!!
person Aymiah
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish more people updated at the speed of light like you XD They should follow your example.
Always a good read, update soon :)
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh love it! especially the plot coming together with Jean and the Professor and all thanks so much for the chappies
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you're mean!!!!!! lol....i want cubs too!!!! keep it up
person Toast
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as usual, what more can I say? Keep it up.
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bounces anxiously awaiting the next chapter*


Thats an evil place to stop at you know?

Wonderful chapter thought! Keep up the great work!
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well there are two words that i can think of to describe the last few chapters....HOLY SHIT!!!! keep it up