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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

person amh
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MMMAAANNNN! Why couldn't Doug just leave Hank there? Those two need some serious alone time. People keep interupting them. It is very frustrating. "Please, sir, may I have some more?" Please keep writing.
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome Back! :) Hee, adorable chapter, just love Doug - would that we were all so lucky to have at least one friend like that... as always, looking forward to more ;). And, despite appearances, I am working on the next chapter of my fic and hope to have it out by the end of the week :D.
person onewing
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! I needed that after today. Keep on writing and don't give up.
person systor1
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have just spent to whole days ready this wonderful story.(most of this time at work in between my boss's walk thoughes) I have gone from groans to rolling on the floor laughter to tears. I must ask How you where able to so completely decribe my family in wyour decrptions of Hanks and Anne's families. (yes I come from a hugh family) But the very best line in the whole story has to be Kurts...“Though I am most curious, Kätzchen, vhat vere you doing vith my undervear?” ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my your next chapter come with great speed!!!
person brina
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:: squeals like a blonde cheerleader:

Ho. Lee. CRAP!!!!!!!!!!

You are my hero. The moon in my starlit sky. The sugar in my koolaid. The pork in my beans. I am thrilled beyond description to see that someone had finally written a Beast fan fic that 1. is frickin' EXCELLENT and ooooooh..has a plot and everything, 2. stays so true to his character, and 3. is overall incredibly well written (i.e. i am not cringing at the use of the english language. (I am not an english teacher or anything but sometimes i am like O.O at grammar.

I love the relationship between Beast and your original character. I also love how you are developing that relationship. Doug is also fantastic. Can I please have my own personal Doug?

Please please PLEASE keep up the good work. PLEASE dont let this story become one of thos ones that becomes abandoned. It is to good for that. Keep it up. I am already addicted.

:: Crushes up "Eye of the Beholder" into a fine powder then snorts it ::

see. I am addicted.

Withdrawal is a scary place and rehab is for quitters. Please grace us with some more story soon.

And when this one is done i will now fully expect to read more Beast fanfic from you young lady.

--Brina
person poyson
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has been great so far I can't wait until you update, Beast has always been one of my favorite X-men characters, along with Wolverine of course. Anyway please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Desiree
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Awsome chapter. When shes drawing, and completly oblivios to everything around her totally reminds me of me when I'm playing video games^_^ Doug is so awsome too, I have a buddy that is soooo much like him! New chapter soon please!! I'm not rushing you or anything, I just can't get enough! XD
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'crabs' muahahaha *dies*
Wonderful chapter and as always looking forward to the next one!!!
person onewing
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sigh..., What a nice way to end the chapter. I have to like the surprise visitor :)
Thanks for getting rid of him. I look forward to the next chapter.
person amh
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I am so glad I checked in today. I needed a new chapter. It has been a tough week and you just made it better. Please keep writing.