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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Wicked, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder'
*is perfection*
You're back, woot! But really, come on, how much longer till we see them really get together??? I mean I know I was a horrible cliffhanger tease but THIS is frickin' torture :P At least give us a hint as to how much longer (as in, pretty soon, still a ways to go, or, not until the very end of this story?). And speaking of back, the new TRTB chapter will probably be up in a week :).
Lovely job on this chapter and, seriously, that line was poetry :D.
person Vixey
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay an update!!! uh oh trouble for the lovebirds? i hope not. keep it up its good
person Desiree
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Good chapter! I served the twinkie sundaes at my last party, and they loved them!!!! Thank you!! But I'm now officially 'Twinkie Lady' to my friends :P
person Desiree
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Good chapter! I served the twinkie sundaes at my last party, and they loved them!!!! Thank you!! But I'm now officially 'Twinkie Lady' to my friends :P
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*reads Trish/Amanda sequence over and over and over*
BRA-F***ING-VA!!!!
WOOT - nicely done ;) This chapter was worth the long wait, can't wait *as always* to read more!!!!
person onewing
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter! I'm glad to see Trish put in her place. Keep up the good work and I am already looking forward to the next chapter.
person Daokan
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is just so cool!!! This story rocks.
I can just say that this is one of the more promising stories I´ve come across, and I have searched over the net for more McCoy stories.
I really hope you continue writting because it would be to bad if this storie end in a rather harsh way.

Continue writting please.
Grettings Daokan
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! I read 30 chapters yesterday and just finished the rest. You've done a really beautiful job of bringing Amanda to life and bringing her and Hank together. I really look foward to reading more! ~Bunny
person Arden
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes? and? he goes back up to her room? she wakes up and goes to the window and yells at him? it starts rainging twinkies?!! arggh!!!!frustration of the thirs degree!!! good chapter though.lol
person Desiree
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again, awsome chapter!! I must try a twinkie sundae! And I am SO serving them at my next party! Which is wednesday, so I'll tell you how they like it^_^ I'll of coarse give you all the credit! lol I wont tell them about the twinkies too, itll be a surprise :P Thank you for the Hanky-Goodness!