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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA i love it when he says that....i wonder waht the dress looks like....keep it up..i cant wait to see more
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!! *damn girl you ARE on a role, here's hoping I get one too after finals :P*
Honest to God your story is so full of 'SQUEE'-ey goodness it would reduce even the most stoic of female readers to giggling like teeny-bopper BackstreetBoy fans... and I say this, of course, from my own experiance.
Well done - oooh, Hank's a Mark Twain man, eh? Shoulda figured - now dangit update so we know what's the big deal with that dress and get to the well overdue naughty-naughty-tender-love!
person onewing
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I am really looking forward to the next update! :)
person Arden
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm back baby! all the way from Tanganika, i'm here ,and what should i find waiting for me, but a half dozen chapters!! arghhhhhhh!!! i haven't eben this excited since i discovered that the bus stops right outside my front door and i don't have to trek a kilometer to the bus stop anymore, as i have for the last nine months!!!! hmm....would it be remiss of me to say that that was completely hot, and Beast's libido is not the only thing calling to mate right now?
Good work!! wanting mnore very much
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy GOD, how did I miss three freaking chapters!!!! *mouth gapes*
OMG - FINALLY - fan-freaking-tastic chapters!!! *raises '10' with thumbs up*, can't wait for the next!!!
*reminds self to KILL the ff.net messaging alert system*
I so would have read these the moment they came if I knew it was out!!! *pouts* oh well, will just have to keep eye out more closely every day ;).
*and I'm hoping to update by next week, school's gone crazy with only two weeks left :P*
Thanks be to your muse, may it get out the hotty chapter quick!!! *... although if Magneto bursts into the bedroom at an inopportune moment I WILL kill him if you don't have Hank do it first, LOL*
WOOT!!!
person Vixey
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
twice? sounds like my life...but both of mine were dispointing...his fault tho...keep it up, almost there
person christina
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wowza.... i got off track for a few chapters, and all i can say is wow. i don't think any author that i've read in at least a year has had me as antsy as you do. i can't wait for you to update soon!!!! any chance of more naughtiness soon, like maybe nekkid beast and nekkid amy?????
person Vixey
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oohh a shadowy figure that speaks french...is it gambit? keep it up, i love it...cant wait for the naughty parts either
person Vixey
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*CHOMP munch MUch* mmmm good cyber cookies....keep it up, and in hanks case up is a good word.....makes me hott just thinking about his voice....dont blame her for wantin to jump him...lol i love doug he's a trip...reminds me of one of my gay friends
person Desiree
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, the plot thickens! Cute lunch scene^_^ But we need some serious Beast action pretty soon :P Thanks again for writing!