AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

person Michael
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another truely spectactular chapter. Long ass wait though, but I won't complain due to your note (as long as we don't have to wait as long as they have). Can't wait till the next chapter. Thanks.
person amh
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! another chapter. I was begining to worry that you weren't going to write any more on this story. This is a wonderful story still and I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated!! and i loved it. ok i may sound like a total moron but what does FOH stand for?
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HUZZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!! *I would complain about the lengthy wait for an update but we all know that'd just be the pot calling the kettle black* GREAT update! Hahahahaha, I love the kids!
Oooooooh, 'FOH', do I detect a new thread to this plot tapestry???? This was just the thing I needed *it's been a tough week physically and emotionally* - wonderful chapter and REALLY looking forward to the next update!!!!
person onewing
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Are you going to make us wait this long for the next one?!
person luna26
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wheeeee! I missed this story. I'm so glad you updated. I think dad is going to come out of this visit with severly black and blue ribs :) Great story! Sounds like they'll need to go for a drive to get any alone time from the family. Please update soon.
person brier
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks to your wonderful story, I did nothing productive today.

Please write more soon.
person onewing
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where is our update?
person Sunny
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know, 'You're Welcome' in German, is biteshön :)
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am ABSOLUTELY LOVING the story! You have me totally enthralled and checking daily to see if there is an update. Keep up the AWESOME work!!!