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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

person onewing
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! I was ready to give up on you. I'm glad that there was an update. Just please tell that muse of yours to let you finish this story.
Great job.
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter!! Story is going fabulously! You are doing an awesome job!
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww so sweet and a wonderful update..i hope the next update is soon
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay... make... everyone... go... to... sleep... NOW.
LOL - awesome chapter and definitely well timed with the holidays fast approaching! Whip that muse back into shape! ;D
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ths song, Latin? Or German? Very nice chapter. But please get that muse of yours under control.
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I NEVER thought I'D say this but.... UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE...
person Aderiana
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really loved this story so far. You've done good things with it and I cant wait for the next chapter. I've been checking everyday since the last was posted in hopes the next will be up. But as a mother myself I fully understand the lack of free time. Good luck and keep up the excellent work.
person luna26
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh dad on overprotective overdrive...they're going to need a taller tree to escape :) Can't wait for the next update, great story
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww too funny...keep it up...hmm sex with hank in a tree in the snow...um no sorry as sexy as he is im not sure that would do it for me
person jesi
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter. I really like the kind of double story lines you have going on with serena, Amanda, and the brotherhood. It really makes for great reading :)