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so so evil.....

GRRRRRRRRRRR! Ok, when is the next update?!?
I still think you need to let the brat have it. PLEASE OH PLEASE let Amanda get back at her! Better yet, let Paul go off with them and to Xaviers. That will teach her some manners.

this keeps getting better can't wait to see how this turns out.

Now ending it there was just plain mean =^.^=

Dude...that is so fucked up. Little miss Annie seriously needs to be bitch slapped and the parents need a reality check. lol it's amazing how a 'simple story' can get somebody so riled up. I guess that just goes to show how great a writer you are! Thanx Jen

Oh that is so evil of you! XPPP

You horrible horrible author! You must get some kind of sick joy out of doing this to your readers.
Seriously, though. The climactic argument here between Hank/Amanda/Stuart/Cathy was both a tad confusing (I had to re-read it, but maybe it's just because I'm a tad slow this morning) and very dramatic! Very well done!
But, again, sick pleasure. Man, you had me LITERALLY on the edge of my seat and then: BAM! Plot twist and the end of the chapter!
Curse yooou!

Holy crap! I have to admit, outside of Annie's bitchiness I was finding the Stuart family's neurosis endearing but now I just want to slap the whole lot of them... aka WELL DONE ^^ as maddening as this chapter is it is a pleasure to read. *joins evil chuckle* yes, it is good to the quee-eh-I mean 'author'. I'm finally starting work on the next chapter (busy week) to mine - poor Beast fans, it's just one cliffhangar after another! Update soon!
PS. While I'm sure it's total coincidence I couldn't help 'heehee'ing to myself to hear Amanda's middle name (being a Rachel myself) ^^ I just don't get to see it in fanfiction print very often so thanks for that. UPDATE SOON you EVIL-eh-GENIUS writer you!

Oops, 'Simon' family, not 'Stuart' :P chock it up to academic mid-term fog that I mistook the father's name for the surname *head desk* again, awesome chapter.

So I take it the double chapter update was a slight consolation for the pure evilness of ending that last part where you did? You are way to good at cliffhangers. I can't wait for the next update.