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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

person lele
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
okay I remember earlier chapters it was told Annie is a mutant whose been to the school at age 14. Now I want to think b/c she is a panther maybe it something to do with feral genes. But I can not understand why her parents condone what Annie done but blames everything on Amanda. Can't believe her mom told her to apologize and Annie should have to b/c she had it coming to her. Then she blames Hank! I have my guesses but got to read some more. Awesome work as usual.
person lele
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OH SNAP!!!!! DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!!! WOW...
person lele
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
okay First let me say that you are on AWESOME writer!!! I'm so sorry I didn't review earlier but I got to caught up! LOL I HAD to say something after this chapter. Too funny & FINALLY they meet. Gotta go read some more...again Outstanding job. :)
person lele
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OH Beast you are so BAD!!!LOL Too funny.
person lele
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding work!!!!!! I honestly can't believe you do not write professionally. I cried & laugh, BOY did I laugh. I felt her pain on their first night and she thought he was rejecting her. My most favorite has got to be the dress for the ball @ the White House, wished they had a chance to dance but great none the less. Hope you continue to write more Beast romance stories.
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I followed this story from fanfiction.net I'm glad I read this version :)
person brier
schedule May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I lost my bookmark to this story when my old computer died. I'm happy that I found it again. That was a great ending!
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* You know I should curse you out and stuff, but I can't find a reason to. I just happened to run over your story while I was taking a break from studying for my mid-terms. And damned if I couldn't put the stupid computer down! Seriously...T-T

Oh well, if I fail, this its a good enough story to blame it on.

person Ox King
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your killing me here. Need Eye for an Eye soon. Need to see what her answer is.
person Ox King
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I started this story, chapter 1 at 8 pm and finished at 5 am. I was bound to read the whole thing through. It was a magnificent story. I want you to know how much I admire your dedication to this wonderful piece of art. 81 one chapters and you kept with it. Your talent to make an individual ignore everything around them and be so engrossed in a story is truly anything short of remarkable. You introduced me to a new character and made a fan out of me. By the time I was done reading I felt I Knew Hank as intimately as his lady love. I hope to be reading your next story Eye for an Eye very soon.