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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that's an interesting take on things...
Kitty can't handle intimacy?
I enjoyed this one.
Kitty can't handle intimacy?
I enjoyed this one.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is really good. I like a lot these spin-offs one-shots you are writing.
Besides, this site REALLY needs more F/F stories. M/M slash isn't my thing, but it is overabundant.
Moreover, I liked how you depicted the Lance/Kitty relaiotnship. Yes, Lance is a bully and a jerk, but he wouldn't want harming Kitty. And she is able to draw out Lance's good traits. But it doesn't mean their relationship is solid or stable. So they'd eventually break up, most assuredly. Those "good girl falling in love with the school's bully" things never work (not matter what the Jean/Logan sect thinks).
Besides, this site REALLY needs more F/F stories. M/M slash isn't my thing, but it is overabundant.
Moreover, I liked how you depicted the Lance/Kitty relaiotnship. Yes, Lance is a bully and a jerk, but he wouldn't want harming Kitty. And she is able to draw out Lance's good traits. But it doesn't mean their relationship is solid or stable. So they'd eventually break up, most assuredly. Those "good girl falling in love with the school's bully" things never work (not matter what the Jean/Logan sect thinks).
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this was certain a great one shot dude I really liked what you did in this from them teaching Kitty and how her problems started off as well. Although there is one problem and I think you goofed on her age. Since this is about the time with the foursome with logan/ororo wouldn't that be a year later and Kitty more like 17 years old instead of 16?