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please E-mail me an update. otak6@nrtco.net

ahhh must have mooore sooo evil right more soon. seriously thought the story is very sweet i like it if you have a mailing list to let people know you update please add me.

Oooh back seat snuggling, that brings back some favorite memories from college. Please continue.

Vena

PLEASE update this story!! It's so cute!! ...and maybe email me when u do so I don't miss a second??

~ Love Loz XoX

Nice story so far. But what are the ages of the main couple. And what is going to happen when they get to the mansion and will they proceed with a good relationship. I guess women do love the fuzzy blue dude. LOL keep up the good work.

Really awesome story! Keep it up!

Hope there's more of this to come soon. You've improved a lot as a writer since your last Evo!fic and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this.

Another good story from you! I especially liked chapter six. Now I think it would be good to have achapter maybe told from Logan's point of view. Simply because you seem to have him deliberatly distracting himself (Lots of comics state that the main reason for Logans bad behavior such as smoking and drinking and listening to loud music are really attempts to dull his senses so he doesn't have to deal with everything his sense tell him all the time.)Maybe he has a better idea of what's happening to Kurt and Kitty than they do.

I really enjoy you'r writing. It's a little OOC, but most fanfiction is. Keep up the awesome work.