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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... I was wondering about the protection thing.
So often authors think nothing of the issue and
keep going on there merry way! As an author, you
keep me impressed with such little things. ~_^
ps: I'm glad you took the bad review so well.
I was tempted to review in response to that person,
because if memory serves correct, they made some
complaints that I whole feel were unjustified and
showed a lack of thorough reading on their part.
I figured it would be pointless. A person like that
surely wouldn't check back...
So often authors think nothing of the issue and
keep going on there merry way! As an author, you
keep me impressed with such little things. ~_^
ps: I'm glad you took the bad review so well.
I was tempted to review in response to that person,
because if memory serves correct, they made some
complaints that I whole feel were unjustified and
showed a lack of thorough reading on their part.
I figured it would be pointless. A person like that
surely wouldn't check back...
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really good last few chapters!! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens! ^_^
-Meg
-Meg
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*holds out a bowl and looks up at you with large doe eyes*
Please mum....might I have some more?
Please mum....might I have some more?
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again! how dare you not go on....you know you seriously bug me when you do that...your stories should just automatically go on forever! But of course...you knew that already. More soon? -Ays
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it! I hope the next chapter comes soon.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ps: almost forgot a bit of amusing irony.
I myself have a cat named Simba ~_^
I myself have a cat named Simba ~_^
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Teasing Harlot!
That was quite a cliffy you left us with!
A mouth-watering tease to truely.
Anyways,
your writing style is so smooth and lovely,
that your chapters will always read quickly.
That was my point darling, though longer
chapters will likely be apprecated by all
-more so with what appears to be coming up next-
Keep up the good work! ^_^
That was quite a cliffy you left us with!
A mouth-watering tease to truely.
Anyways,
your writing style is so smooth and lovely,
that your chapters will always read quickly.
That was my point darling, though longer
chapters will likely be apprecated by all
-more so with what appears to be coming up next-
Keep up the good work! ^_^
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the use of all the words, even the so called "broken" German. Feels real enough to me! The dialogue is superb, never usuing the same, broken wording twice. With the descripotion and setting, the story is quite enjoyable and with t=the ending I hope you put out chapter 7 shortly! I dont know if I can wait any longer..
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You must write more....or or...ill kidnap your precious blue demon.. i swear i will!! No, really, you must must must write more... soon! -Aislyn