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by fourpawsonthefloor

person JS
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Paws,

Fantastic work! I really love how Remy's "heart was tripping at a fast clip" SO descriptive! What a naughty naughty girl TJ is. If only dear old daddy could see his little girl now. Anyway, apart from the wrong homonyms being used, I really enjoyed this.