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for Winter of Our Discontent

by arenkorin

person CeeCee
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait...*checks pulldown menu for chapter count* There's no more????

This was so engaging that I didn't get to review each chapter separately. I couldn't stop reading, Lex. Remy using his empathy to absorb Logan's pain and take it away was compelling and well-done. You really feel for these two when one of them finds the other one slumped and grieving. Remy's migraines have me worrying and chewing my nails over here!!

I love the tender love scenes, the dialogue and the bits of humor. I feel for Logan every time he gets up to find Remy missing and enjoy his relief every time he returns. Great stuff. More please.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four had me cheering for Ororo. Chapter one had me hooked on the story...and when those files popped up....I was engrossed in this like nobody's business. And now...now I'm looking for the next chapter...there is another yes? It's coming soon to sate all of our curisousity about what's going to happen next in this exciting saga?
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grumbles and growls* Scott needs a bullet to his brain. Fucker. What happens next? I wanna know! When's the next chapter?!?
person Butterick
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell YES! Go Storm! *waves pompoms* this is an exquisitly written piece :) I do hope you update soon as I'm *dieing* to know what happens next :)
person Cerlia
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. Don't keep everyone waiting too long for more. Great job!!!!!
person Kale
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Great Plot.....please please write more..........
person Katt
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story! Keep up the wonderful work your doing.
Be looking for more soon.
person Beej
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm falling in love with this story all over again. You give such a compationate, caring voice to my favorite boys. Ihope this means you're ready to continue?
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! I want more! It's been a while since I read this story. It was only up to chapter three the last time that I read it but I absolutely love it!
person lisagems
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story about my two favorite X-men. I do hope you plan to continue sometime.