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for Good Girls Don't Get Caught

by Ginevrasn

schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was incredible and sexy. I need to go take a shower now.
person KJDB
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I was so very pleased to see an update for GGDGC! While you 'warn' us up front you were going for a different feel for this particular chapter, I find it just as enthralling and involving as the previous ones. I agree whole-heartedly on the obvious pairing of WW3 and Storm - it just makes so much sense. And how could the ability to fly *ever* become commonplace?? While I hope your novel is coming along nicely for you, I also hope that you won't let us here at AFF languish hopelessly for updates !
person OriginalCeenote
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this, because it casts Jean in a new light, namely someone who's pretty aggressive about taking what she wants. She doesn't have the supplicating, needy feel in this that I've seen with her in other fics. I never really considered that she would have the capacity to explore her teammates' dreams, particularly since in the comics, she spends a lot of time trying to lock other people's stray thoughts out of her head, so this was a refreshing change. I enjoyed the tone and style, too. You're very gifted.
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read the whole story and I'm glad you updated or I wouldn't have known this story even existed! I've got my own Hank story going and you've given me an idea or two. *evil, naughty snickers ensue*

Congratulations on the Spawn...I mean Angel...I've got a couple of my own, so I know exactly what you're talking about.

I don't know your hubby, but I'm going to take a wild ass guess and say the school uniforms were his idea. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go take a very long, very cold shower. More soon please.
person xxxBakura'sloverxxx
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! Very good! Update Soon!
person dazzledfirestar
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Love the new chapters! So happy to see Remy in there. Mon dieu! And Scott's dream choice seemed almost... karmic after that! LOL Keep it up, can't wait see who the next "victim" is!
person dazzledfirestar
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's fantastic! I always thought she had a dirty little secret! :) What's the quote from Rocky Horror Picture Show? A mental mind fuck can be nice!
Will there be more? Will it just be Logan or will she... umm... visit any of her other teammates? Can't wait to find out! Keep it up!
person Dazzledfirestar
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Chapter 2 is very hot! And Colossus? That's brilliant! Can't wait to see who's next on the list! ;)