rate_review Reviews

Cody- O_O Oh gods! Soooo hot! And rough! And in character! and... and... *dies from hotness overload* x_x


Cody's Muse- Well, that was definitely one of the best shower scenes we've ever read, and she's a REALLY big fan of shower scenes. ^_^ Don't worry about her, she'll be fine. You however are immediately going onto our recommended reading list. (You're also the only X-men author to ever make it on that list, so feel special!) *pokes Cody* As soon as she recovers from this most recent bout of death, we shall continue reading the rest of your Logurty goodness. And she's a notorious reviewer so you'll most likely receive a review from anything she reads. Crazy habit I know, but we've yet to hear an author complain about it. ^_^ See you soon!

Wow. It's been a long time since I've read a PWP with such wonderful and descriptive imagery. You have taken a shower-fic and elevated it to poetry. Though it is short, you give Logan and Kurt such a deep and complex relationship, that I would love to read more of. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Whee! I loved the whole "My Mate!" idea of the fic. It was beautiful. And you're so descriptive! Truly amazing.

Loved this fic! Not only was it a hot lemon, but it had plot and feeling, which made it more than just a PWP. Very beautiful. I hope there's more to come!

The water in that shower was nowhere near as hot as the romp between Logan and Kurt! I love how you put in German in Kurt's lines of dialogue; that really brings out character, and lets face it, it's just plain sexy!

Wow. You certainly do have a lovely way with description. In fanfictions, I often find that the authors aren't, in the end, true to the original characters they portray, but, after reading several of your fics, I especially love the way that you don't do that. Everything Logan does, says, thinks...it sounds like Logan, and it makes it so easy to picture it all happening. The way you describe Kurt's body, his tone, his voice...even his tail (love his tail), all make vivid, acturate pictures in my mind, and I love it.

Especially with mutant stories, where the characters aren't exactly human, I've seen several people just conviniently 'ignore' that Rogue can't touch or that Cyclops needs his visor...that Kurt has three fingers. The way you specifically don't let your readers forget any of the details...makes everything all the more sexual and erotic. For a shower scene (oftentimes thrown together and lousily done), this is one of the most enjoyable one shots I've come across.

Superb details, excellent characterization, and terrific job with good, hard core rough sex...while still keeping the intercourse personal. The German added a beautiful touch and after reading it, I couldn't help but review. Thank you for taking the time to post and share this. Gorgeous job.

-Moonstar

Sick, (sick as in awsome). I love Logen and Kurt fic.s ecspecially when Kurt speaks German cause I can understand him!

That was absolutely sizzling! The best shower sex I've read in a long time.
I especially liked the way you used German words occasionally (and with the right tenses and stuff, that's a real plus).
I really, really hope you'll write more Logan/Kurt stuff, because I'm absolutely hooked on that pairing right now!