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by jukeboxcsi

person Darkdevil
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm giving you six stars or more. This story is great I love stories you can
jump right into it that caputue your imagination. Keep up the good work
hope to see more chapers soon.
person SlashFanLover
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was just skimming over the first chapter and fell in love with this story. I have it on my favorite's list so I can just keep coming back and picking up where I left off. I'm not that far yet, just reading where Remy was in the training room and fainted. I love it! I love it! I so hope there is a love scene in this. Can't wait to finish your story. It's mega great!!
person Nom Arble
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this whole story to pieces. It's so incredibly well written and emotional. I haven't read anything this good in a long time. So well done- I hope you're proud of it because it's definitely something to be proud of.
person SolarCat
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this. I just read this whole thing, and I really hope you continue it soon! ^-^
person Lakota Girl
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A most excellent story. I have enjoyed all of your stories on AFF greatly. Lots of people can write the more 'heated' moments but few can capture true emotion and give life to their characters. You are a very talented story teller; don't let anyone discourage you. It's a rare and wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.
person nocturne
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, more more more! ^^ I love this.
person Oferia13
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, soon.
person Byakou
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*DROOLS* hotness sex *dies*
person Zuzanny
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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I was really surprised at Logan's request. I tend to preferr it the other way around. But it was a nice change. ;p I look forward to the "next time". And I wonder what Logan is going to do when he finds out the Sabertooth is Remy's "other ferel"? HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM???????????????????????? :P
person Zuzanny
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm-hmmm... and will that other ferel come gloating? Please write the next bit very soon!