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by jukeboxcsi

person DC McLain
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a gift w/ words and I truly love this piece. I wasn't sure of the pairing when I started but I am truly entranced. Can't wait for more!
person Jukebox
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Rachel! Since I didn't have an email address for you, I thought I'd respond to your question here. Logan & Sabertooth are smelling each other on Remy, but they don't know each other (or can't remember each other) and so as far as they can tell it's an unknown person's scent on Remy. =D Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
person rachael
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Joy! An update! thank you so much. You've made my day. The new chapter is as good as the rest of the fic and I hope you find the time to continue. I can't wait to see what happens. One question, though, how come the two ferals (Wolverine and Sabertooth) don't ever respectively smell the other on Remy? Or is this set before the Wolfie, Sabertooth enemy rivalry?
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. Please more.
person Harold
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. F*ck what all the other people said. They couldnt write anything better.
I love your imagery, you make me feel like I'm actually there.
*hugs*
person Byakou
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I realy love this fic. i wish you would continue to write it.
person Zuzanny
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(25)So where's the rest of this, HMMMMM?
person margyy
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im totally in love with this fic :) i check your website everyday to see if you updated yet LOL ^.^; pleease update soon! ♥
person nikkiling
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading x-men slash again after a long hiatus, and this was a real treat! I love this fic and I love the way you portray the characters; even the minor characters like Krystal and Dimitri are wonderful. Your Logan and Remy are perfect, and your Storm (That was a breath of fresh air. I haven't read the comics in years, and the movie Storm leaves a sour taste in my mouth)
I keep waiting for something to slip; his powers to burst completely out of control, revealing himself (but that didn't quite happen); or for Rogue to touch him and learn more than she should (but you negated THAT quite well also! Argh!)
I am on pins and needles for more!
person Pizela
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Remy and Logan playing cards for the price of questions was really clever. I love how you have Logan getting so close to finding things out about Remy and how Remy is crafty and claims that any odd sense of feeling is because of his power to charge things. this chapter was so much fun to read. I kept wondering what questions they are going to ask next. I really liked it.