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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing start and i cant surely cant wait to see what happens next.Hope to see a post soon.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet story :D
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story, but logan should be "short, dark, and growly" not Tall
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good. You did an excellent job of sticking to their true nature. Detailed but not to the point of being agonizing. The *only* thing I feel the need to bring up is that the word "delectable" was used so much. Careful of repitition.
5/5
5/5
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really like your sassy Marie!
And like the story.
Just one anatomical error the little membrane (hymen) is not half way in it's just at the entrance to the female body.
And like the story.
Just one anatomical error the little membrane (hymen) is not half way in it's just at the entrance to the female body.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, and well written at that. Few to no grammatical errors that I saw. good read. Thanks!
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, I enjoyed it. I think if you plan on writing any first time scenes in the future however, you might benefit from reading this article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hymen
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ewww rogue and logan??? thats so fuckin gross hes like 40 isnt that like some sort of stsgatory rape ? Hes more like a father to her.... u sicken me!!!! Dont ever write about rogue doing it with wolverine cuz thats too fuckin disturbing!!! THANKS!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like ur fic so far e mail me when ya update please