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by nermal

schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I liked how you made Jay this arrogant character -in the comics, he's always sad. It was a nice change. But Havok? Yes, I know he was the one who showed Jay around the mansion, but I don't think they really TALKED after that... did they?
Any way, thanks for writing this! It was appreciated by me, at least!