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for HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BOY

by dayrunner

person Jags
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was hot you should have finished it!
person jags
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story but would have like to see it go all the way. Well written bravo.
person unknownthreat@???
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the pairing, it was really good.
person pontaloon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS NOT NICE!!! TO END A STORY LIKE THAT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL ESPECIALLY SINCE BOBBYXLOGAN YAOI IS RARE!!! AAAARRRRRRGGGGG!!! I'M SO FRUSTRATED I COULD KILL A KITTEN!!!
person paul
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! i want moooore! you cant end it like that! lol. darn, fucking hot though
person blackbird
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please write more!
person sucks
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg it sucks
person Leona
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG.....You can't leave it like that......damn you......please finsh the story........your a really great writer....please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Leona
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG.....You can't leave it like that......damn you......please finsh the story........your a really great writer....please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person zad
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So good, but too short! There was the hint of a plot in there, are you going to write more? please?