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May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, someone should make a video out of this! :D Can't wait for more!
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May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey buddy great chapter there I liked how Rogue was the one to finally point out just how strange things were getting, and I have to wonder why she cared so much lol. I can't wait to see what Ororo does to get logan off the scent as it were. I loved the little role playing there that was fun to watch.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great installment and god I thought I had an idea of what would happen but nothing like that.. I thought she would wait to do anal but I was wrong. Well hope to get the next update soon and great job on writing the story as good as u did
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I think they'll be caugth
And I hope they'll speak about love sooner than in "hanging by a moment" ;)
Carry on
JOTT FOREVER
And I hope they'll speak about love sooner than in "hanging by a moment" ;)
Carry on
JOTT FOREVER
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter sures has made up for the long waiting! :) A lot smutt and good characterization. You have those twosome really down, and I'm very glad with the scenes we are seeing for now. They are great! ^_^
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey man glad to see you finally getting a chance at updating this I know you've wanted to for sometime now and it was well worth the wait. I do wonder what else is going to happen but I think you said this is where Logan/Ororo get into it. What happens? While this was going on they found the rest of the tea and drank it without knowing what it was?
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay finally! I was beginning ot think that aff.net was going to be down forever!
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March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
Well AFF.Net is back up to it's former glory so I'm here to review. I must say that this was a very well done intro to Crystal and I hope she shows up more later on and helps to teach Jean and Scott more on sex. I hope Jean did get that prono tape with her in it and is surprised to see Crystal in it lol.
Well AFF.Net is back up to it's former glory so I'm here to review. I must say that this was a very well done intro to Crystal and I hope she shows up more later on and helps to teach Jean and Scott more on sex. I hope Jean did get that prono tape with her in it and is surprised to see Crystal in it lol.
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March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
Another fine chapter. Really I like how you portrait and explore the characters, their relationships and their evolution. And I like how you write the smut scenes. They are very, very enticing ^_^.
Heh. If the team ever finds out about Scott and Jean's methods for having fun, their jaws will hit the ground. :D
Usually you don't see Ororo characterized like a motherly figure and a female role model for the girls, but it works here and gives more dimensions to her character.
I take Scott and Jean will keep on exploring in future chapters and you're about of going deeper in LoRo. I'm glad.
Another fine chapter. Really I like how you portrait and explore the characters, their relationships and their evolution. And I like how you write the smut scenes. They are very, very enticing ^_^.
Heh. If the team ever finds out about Scott and Jean's methods for having fun, their jaws will hit the ground. :D
Usually you don't see Ororo characterized like a motherly figure and a female role model for the girls, but it works here and gives more dimensions to her character.
I take Scott and Jean will keep on exploring in future chapters and you're about of going deeper in LoRo. I'm glad.