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for My Friend, My Lover

by marvelmaster616

person Wen
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow they reached to hide it for weeks, not bad lol
ROTFLMAO : “Suddenly, Kurt popped into the kitchen with Bobby. They were both carrying an empty tub of” I feared that it was something else lol as the continuation was on the next sentence lol
Logan, come on, don’t tell me that you don’t have a clue lol
My my, what will he do ? search their room ? spy on them ? Strange he hadn’t heard them until there lol
Wen
person Wen
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If they tell them they were dating, it could ba a good thing they’d think that it was the reason…
Oh man, what Duncan will do…?
Jean, you made a poor telepath, you’re reacting like that cos you’re in love
Restroom? Oh no Jean, you won’t do what I think you want to do…she’ll lol, you’ve heard right Scott lol
Not bad the sentence about X-Men Evolution lol
Oh man, they won’t have the occasion to shower….
LOL for the projection thing !
Oh man Rogue found out
They’re lucky for Logan……no they weren’t lol OH MAN
Trouble to come and still purchases at the sex shop not used
Wen
person Jenskott
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

I don't remember if I reviewed this chapter before, so...

Well, Jean really put in use the toys she had purchased. Very good use, some would tell. And sure Scott didn't regret it. :D

Cool chapter, pal.
person Jenskott
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

Oh, I see the group is finally smelling a rat (well, no precisely a rat and exactly smelling but you have the idea ^_^). It isn't a surprise Rogue has been the first one has realized. She's the older between them and she has always been very wary and distrustful.

Drugs? I was about of laughing when I realized it turns out so believable it isn't funny. Two teenagers with the burdens of school and training, in charge of several superpowered, reckless teenagers and with the obligation of setting an example... it wouldn't be unusual the responsibility became a too heavy burden and they looked for some... relief. A way of running away the responsibilities and the distress comes with them.

Fortunately they turned to the sex :D.

I see they're becoming increasingly kinky. Heh. Some tell they are always the quieter ones. Though better they be REALLY quiet now Logan is watching them.
person Jenskott
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13

Thigs are complicating to Scott and Jean, despite of the distress they are releasing with her nightly sessions. Jean showed a very creative way to use her telepathy when she dodged Duncan, but it won't help her with Taryn and her renewed interest for banging Scott. *Her* Scott.

Oh, they had to do it, right? Not that I minded reading it, but now Rogue has caught them... And worst yet, Logan. May God have mercy on their souls. Or maybe an ebony-skinned Goddess. I wonder what she will be planning. :)
person Agent-G
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update dude and that was a nice short quicky they had in school although you just know that little mental slippage of Jean's is going to bite her in the ass. (not literally unless she likes that type of things lol)

Anyway I can see Rogue getting Jean alone and confronting her all about this if not in the next chapter then soon. She is the more direct of the X-Men I think and I really look forward to that.
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your sex scene... very unrealistic
person alrischa
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...looks like somebody's in trouble! I can't wait to see how they weasel out of this one! ;)
person Josh
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter hope to read more
person Amazing Redd Phoenix
schedule May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, it was only logical for them to think that Scott and Jean were doing drugs. If I were them I'd think that too. It's great to see this other side of Scott and Jean. More 'fun' and 'playful'. I wonder what Logan and the others are going to do to find out what's going on between them. Please update soon.
Jott 4Ever