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for My Friend, My Lover

by marvelmaster616

person Agent-G
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was funny when Logan's reaction to when Ororo knew and when Logan showed them that whip lol. Those were priceless and loved how Ororo and Logan scene went on as well that was certainly interesting and fun to read. Now I just have to wonder what will happen now and with Taryn wanted to try and get back together how will this play out?
person alrischa
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...RoLo finally gets some action! Well thank god for that, we still want to see more jott smut! ;)
person Crystal
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah i know... but i forgot to ask you a question on my review... speaking of the sadie hawkins dance... will you make Jean ask a certain tall, handsome, chocolate-haired glasses-wearing guy? that is they're still alive... well i guess i'll find out till the next update... update soon and keep 'em coming Slick.
person Omeganian
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He DOES envy them!
person Agent-G
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter man, loved how they were nearly pushed into breaking down there although with Logan now knowing it all might screw things up for them unless Ororo can convince him that leaving them alone would be good and I think we all know the best way she can 'convince' him lol. Nice little walk into the world of S&M too.
person hunter
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Could you please, please make Jean pregnant and Duncan finds out and goes after Scott? If you need help or suggestions email me at hunterjboggs@yahoo.com. I'm a writer too and a ScottJean fan. Email me please.

Hunter
person Josh
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Slick that was a great update I like the whole lil romp at school which made a few girls get very wet and aroused by the psychic presence and well just keep up the good writings and hopefully they see that they want to be more than FWB and become BF/GF and forget Duncan and Taryn
person alrischa
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meep, I'm almost afraid of what Logan's gonna do to them. But this was a hot chapter! :)
person Josh
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Slick hope to get an update on this story cuz ur making it very interesting expeccionally with people getting suspicious about them and hope to see an update soon JTB8834@aol.com if u ever need help drop me a line peace out
person Omeganian
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, this reminds me of one story. They say that during World War II, One of Stalin's people reported to him that Marshal Konstantin Rokossovsky, one of the best military commanders in the army, has all kind of women around him. Nurses, pilots, communication workers, now some actress has arrived and shows no sign of wanting to leave, her husband is worried... Well, he describes, describes all that and in the end, asks:
Well, what shall we do, Comrade Stalin?
Stalin thinks for a moment, and then answers:
What shall we do? We shall ENVY him.
And the case was closed.