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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good but sex scenes likes eachother.You must do something strange.
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good, keep it up! :)
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will the at least admit their feelings ? I hope so !
Ororo wasn't surprised that Jean knew for her and Logan lol
CARRY ON
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen
Ororo wasn't surprised that Jean knew for her and Logan lol
CARRY ON
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I was wondering when Jean and Scott's feelings would start to evolve and they would have to deal with it, loved the talk with Jean and Ororo there. Plus a nice look for Ororo with the scene with her and Logan very nice. And of course another nice sex scene with Logan and Ororo.
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16
Ah, so at last their feelings are beginning to evolve. Mm... A pity. Now they get Logan off their backs, they have to deal with a new complication. Well, this is their punishment/reward. :D
Hey, that was a really good LoRo sex scene. Really good. :)
Please, keep on writing more chapters of this great fic. ^_^
Ah, so at last their feelings are beginning to evolve. Mm... A pity. Now they get Logan off their backs, they have to deal with a new complication. Well, this is their punishment/reward. :D
Hey, that was a really good LoRo sex scene. Really good. :)
Please, keep on writing more chapters of this great fic. ^_^
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is great.Sex scenes are great and too hot.But a little exaggerated.I don't like anal.It doesn't work for me.And jean can't be fucked at her ass.It can cause to bad results for her.I don't want it for her.
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14
Yes, this is my review. It was about time, right? :)
I laughed a lot seeing the remainder mutants cornering Scott and Jean bombarding them with questions. I pity them, but they deserve it partially. They should have been more careful in the school. ;)
Damn it, that lovemaking sessiong was hot! You have outdone yourself here, man.
I only hope Logan doesn't kill them. Ouch.
Yes, this is my review. It was about time, right? :)
I laughed a lot seeing the remainder mutants cornering Scott and Jean bombarding them with questions. I pity them, but they deserve it partially. They should have been more careful in the school. ;)
Damn it, that lovemaking sessiong was hot! You have outdone yourself here, man.
I only hope Logan doesn't kill them. Ouch.
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15
Ah. At last the RoLo scene. I had been looking forward to it.
And it was really good. Since the moment Ororo talked Logan into reason to the moment she talked him into sex. You showed really the deep bond they have.
And I'm glad of Scott won't be beheaded and eviscerated in the nearby future. :D
I really want reading more. You rock, pal.
Ah. At last the RoLo scene. I had been looking forward to it.
And it was really good. Since the moment Ororo talked Logan into reason to the moment she talked him into sex. You showed really the deep bond they have.
And I'm glad of Scott won't be beheaded and eviscerated in the nearby future. :D
I really want reading more. You rock, pal.
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol it was really risky, they searched for it
oh man, they're dead lol
Wen
oh man, they're dead lol
Wen
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, the shame of their life lolololololololol
And that's for sure, it's unbelievable that they're still only "friends with benefics", you got to change it Slicky
And please, answer to us, we didn't even know you had updated :(
Wen
And that's for sure, it's unbelievable that they're still only "friends with benefics", you got to change it Slicky
And please, answer to us, we didn't even know you had updated :(
Wen