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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
Well it's nice to finally see Jean and Scott get together 'officailly' so I take it the next day they'll be all couply and then this will be a surprise for (most) of them. That should be nice to see although will you show what Logan and Ororo were doing in that bike ride during this time or just leave it where you left off last time?
Well it's nice to finally see Jean and Scott get together 'officailly' so I take it the next day they'll be all couply and then this will be a surprise for (most) of them. That should be nice to see although will you show what Logan and Ororo were doing in that bike ride during this time or just leave it where you left off last time?
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, they finally got together and it's about time. :)
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18
I know, I'm late. I'm sorry, pal. I hope my review can atone it. :)
You showed very well how conflicted Jean is. I hope she is successful. It would be very sad she lost Scott right when she was realizing her feelings for him.
I think Logan summarized efficiently the situation; still I hope Ororo is right. No big surprise here. ;)
And I hope she shows it to Logan! :D
Yes, she definitely showed him. Good girl, Ororo.
Poor Scott. He should get himself a backbone to deal with Taryn. Maybe then he wouldn't in that mess.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I think I can virtually guarantee it will be a dance neitehr of them will forget soon -even if some of them would try hard-.
Keep up the good work! ^_^
I know, I'm late. I'm sorry, pal. I hope my review can atone it. :)
You showed very well how conflicted Jean is. I hope she is successful. It would be very sad she lost Scott right when she was realizing her feelings for him.
I think Logan summarized efficiently the situation; still I hope Ororo is right. No big surprise here. ;)
And I hope she shows it to Logan! :D
Yes, she definitely showed him. Good girl, Ororo.
Poor Scott. He should get himself a backbone to deal with Taryn. Maybe then he wouldn't in that mess.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I think I can virtually guarantee it will be a dance neitehr of them will forget soon -even if some of them would try hard-.
Keep up the good work! ^_^
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Slickboy great update and hope everything works out for Logan and Ororo they seem to be able to balance eahc other out and well Scott and Jean need to stop being so stubborn and say the words they need to tell each other the three words they can't say
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, can't wait for more. I've been reading a few of your stories, here and at fanfiction.net. The only problem I've noticed so far is that sometimes you get your time periods wrong - like saying its been months one place, and one month another place, or other small details like that. ... And you haven't done it awhile, but personally I just can't picture softball sized breasts as all that large. Wrong analogy ^_^ Otherwise, I love the characterization and I can't wait to see them finally work things out.. eventually.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 18
Well I can see Jean has her work cut out for her, and Scott is having doubts about Tyran I guess this dance will show how things go with all of this pretty soon. Nice scene with Logan and Ororo why do I get the feeling this will pick up again with those two later on with the bike ride? Maybe stopping off at a wooded area for a little 'late night hunting' if you get my drift lol.
Well I can see Jean has her work cut out for her, and Scott is having doubts about Tyran I guess this dance will show how things go with all of this pretty soon. Nice scene with Logan and Ororo why do I get the feeling this will pick up again with those two later on with the bike ride? Maybe stopping off at a wooded area for a little 'late night hunting' if you get my drift lol.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a lot of catching up to do. Loved the chapters. Didn't see the Taryn conflict coming, but I loved how you wanted to tie the story back in with Evo. Nice job :)
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
she could ask him, afterall, she can pretend that she doesn't know he has a date
But overall, if only she had sent him a telepathic message or burst in the middle of Taryn's words, she would have had her chance, as Scott would have given her the priority for a talk
Carry on!
JOTT FOREVER !
But overall, if only she had sent him a telepathic message or burst in the middle of Taryn's words, she would have had her chance, as Scott would have given her the priority for a talk
Carry on!
JOTT FOREVER !
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17
Oh, Hell, things have got more complicated only of sudden. Right when we thought Scott and Jean would get a good, nice chat and a bit of lovemaking later, Taryn gets in the way. I suppose you wanted surprising us, didn't you?
What will Jean do now? Poor thing. Will she follow the advice she got? Or she'll kill Taryn first?
Next chapter soon, pal. Please. I'm pleading you (Can you tell "No" to this face? :().
Oh, Hell, things have got more complicated only of sudden. Right when we thought Scott and Jean would get a good, nice chat and a bit of lovemaking later, Taryn gets in the way. I suppose you wanted surprising us, didn't you?
What will Jean do now? Poor thing. Will she follow the advice she got? Or she'll kill Taryn first?
Next chapter soon, pal. Please. I'm pleading you (Can you tell "No" to this face? :().
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this was s nice tie in to that epsiode of the dance, like that bit with Kurt and the gloves and stuff. And another nice twist with Taryn and all as well so now Jean has to do soemthing before that dance. I mean it's not like she can try something at the dance that wouldn't be right and too late as well. So she might as well suck it up and tell him soon before that.